This piece of work is a formal letter from John walker to Mr and Mrs Jackson, who are characters from Swallowdale, about a shipwreck.
Swallowdale,
High Moor,
Rio,
H48 1RZ.
7th July 1940
Dear Mr and Mrs Jackson,
I am writing to apologise and explain about the shipwreck of Swallow.
The rest of the Swallows and I were going to Horseshoe Cove. I wanted to impress Nancy, who was at the cove with Peggy, so I decided not to jibe. All his lead to was the shipwreck of Swallow. After the salvage of your boat, we sent Swallow to be repaired.
I am very sorry. Please let me know if there is anything I can do.
Your sincerely,
John Walker
This second part is an informal letter to John’s friend, Tom, about the shipwreck of Swallow.
Swallowdale,
High Moor,
Rio,
H48 1RZ.
7/7/1940
Hello Tom,
I am writing to let you know about the shipwreck of Swallow.
My family and I were going to Horseshoe Cove. I wanted to impress one of our pirate friends, who was at the cove, so I decided not to jibe. This led to the shipwreck of Swallow. Now, Swallow is being repaired. I am very sad because the shipwreck was my fault.
We are currently living in Swallowdale, expecting an attack from our pirate friends.
Your friend,
John